A Prompt in English Class; "Before and After"
A constant sound, loud thud, gentle ricochet, soft whoosh, little reverberation.
A constant motion, strong pressure, steady flow, reversed motion, pulling in.
A constant pulse, sharp spike, spreading foreword, directional current, fading out.
SILENCE
A constant echo, memories shutter, forever frozen, lost grip, broken hope.
A constant stillness, missing beat, developed pain, never moving, now halted.
A constant lack, sudden jolt, empty chambers, rigger found, deadly silent.
~~Ivy Soliene-Takara
3 comments:
Reading this makes me thing of a lot of different things all at once, I like it ^_^
thanx! It is suposed to, do you know WHAT I'm talking about in it?
Three points to you if you know.
Does one still recieve three points if he was there in class when you read it?
(smiles)
If I am not mistaken, this is about a heart beat.
Three points or not, it has been fun reading your soul today. Oh, I have a few writes here... but most of my soul is elsewhere.
You are a trupoet as well. You know where my soul is.
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